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--- fof:characters:brian [2013/10/23 01:24] – [Aspects] bblonski
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 Tkt'tckykct'tyik'ckycyk'tkcyc'ktyi (aka Susan)
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 ### Skills
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 Failing to make it into the space program or gain the resources to make it off world, she graduated with a useless archeology degree.
 The closest to fulfilling her dream was becoming a chef for the Voraskan Space Program, preparing meals for would be astronauts.
-She also took to occasionally sneaking off worlds artifacts out of the space museum when she could.
+She also took to occasionally sneaking off-world artifacts out of the space museum when she could.
 #### Phase 3
 Everything was going relatively well until she was tasked with preparing a special meal for a high ranking official.
-While preparing the last know ChTkiyThiskeythsk (a Voraskan delicacy) in existence, she lost control of her impulse control and devoured it whole.
+While preparing the last know ChTkiyThiskeythsk (a Voraskan delicacy) in existence, she lost control of her impulses and devoured it whole.
 Knowing the consequences would be dire, she decided to flee, stowing away in some cargo heading off world.
 She lived off bits of trash for days until the crate she was hiding in was finally launched into orbit.