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 Tkt'tckykct'tyik'ckycyk'tkcyc'ktyi (aka Susan)
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 ### Skills
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 ### Aspects
-Sneaky Voraskan Explorer
+Sneaky Voraskan Stowaway
 "Oooh, Shiny... mine now"
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 Failing to make it into the space program or gain the resources to make it off world, she graduated with a useless archeology degree.
 The closest to fulfilling her dream was becoming a chef for the Voraskan Space Program, preparing meals for would be astronauts.
-She also took to occasionally sneaking off worlds artifacts out of the space museum when she could.
+She also took to occasionally sneaking off-world artifacts out of the space museum when she could.
 #### Phase 3
 Everything was going relatively well until she was tasked with preparing a special meal for a high ranking official.
-While preparing the last know ChTkiyThiskeythsk (a Voraskan delicacy) in existence, she lost control of her impulse control and devoured it whole.
+While preparing the last know ChTkiyThiskeythsk (a Voraskan delicacy) in existence, she lost control of her impulses and devoured it whole.
 Knowing the consequences would be dire, she decided to flee, stowing away in some cargo heading off world.
 She lived off bits of trash for days until the crate she was hiding in was finally launched into orbit.
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 They boarded the foreign vessel in an attempt to take the cargo by force.
 Tkt'tckykct'tyik'ckycyk'tkcyc'ktyi used the opportunity to sneak aboard the foreign vessel.
-The other Voraskan were driven off, but the foreign trade vessel was left badly damaged, the engine room flooded with radiation.
+The other Voraskan were driven off, but the foreign trade vessel was left badly damaged and flooding with radiation.
 Reveling herself to [[fof:characters:Ryan|Trenton]], she made a deal to assist with repair on the condition that she be allowed to come with them.
-Using her natural Voraskan immunity to radiation, she was able to make the necessary repairs for the vessel to escape.
+Using her natural Voraskan immunity to radiation, she was able to assist with the necessary repairs for the vessel to escape.
 #### Phase 5